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A LOVER'S SURRENDER

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A lover’s surrender is beyond perception
The ultimate sacrifice of me and mine
It is a perfect binding connection
Transcending the very realms of time

A true lover is always sincere
For the ego has no place
In a heart without fear
There is only grace

A lover’s surrender is beyond condition
The ultimate rejection of me and my
It is the perfect act of submission
Transcending the very thoughts of “I”

Beyond a lover’s surrender is the One
In the nameless region above
The journey complete and done
All that remains is love
What is real love?
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JeanneyLost's avatar
What should I say...You´re so right. :)
I like the "flow", too, like someone, who commented before.
When I was younger I thought I´d never fall in love. (Because I was just like the other little girls at the age of six, seven years and didn´t like boys at all :D Things change :D) Later I thought, love was about finding someone, that truly, completely accepts you, without caring for your mistakes and imperfection.
Then I fell in love. And everything I thought before was proven to be wrong.
You´d give yourself up. You´d do EVERYTHING for this one person. You´d change your complete self, for the other one to be happy. (Never said, this was me...:P...ok and never said this wasn´t me :D)
That´s at least the experience I made...